Wednesday 1 July 2015

Anzac poem

anzac poppies blow and blow in the gun shots the gun shots blow wounded men on the ground and in the trentis men ded on the ground men ling

1 comment:

  1. Hey Felix!
    It's great that you are adding some other stuff!
    Your poem is very good! :)
    You should look at your spelling it doesn't really make sence?

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