Friday 31 August 2018

week 6 post

This week in the book the boy in the striped pyjamas we have made it to chapter 14 and we had to do a diary entry on Gretel and this is my on that I did.




Diary Entry

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Felix it's Byron from M3 I really like how you used describing words and maybe next time you could fix your spelling and use less like.

    (great work :keep it up:)

    from Byron

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.